Author: Tamir
Deja Vu
A short story regaling the frantic escapades of 4’10brunette/Meow/Sweet
By, Tamir
It didn’t used to be this way.
It started like the rest of us,
Lurking, innocuous, not much of a fuss.
We gave it some attention,
Tried to welcome it,
Make it feel at home.
There was always a hint of fragility,
Needing to go the extra mile,
Taking a little more time.
Had to spell things out,
No big deal,
Everything seemed fine.
Little did we know,
The attention was cancerous,
And its needs began to grow.
We tried to console it,
But it was of no use,
It wouldn’t listen, simply too obtuse.
It’s ego had metastasized,
Stratospheric insecurity,
Narcissistic personality.
Banned from other websites,
It came to our beloved EUM,
Hiding its sickness from we good men.
We held our ground,
And gave it hell,
Never conceding an inch.
We deal with all types here,
Even poser jerkoffs,
Some beyond the pale.
We thought we were free,
Absolved of this thing,
But it wasn’t meant to be.
It rose again,
Under a new name,
Its identity it tried to feign.
We welcome this new chapter,
Whatever it may bring,
However long it may last.
We don’t run away,
Determined to prevail,
Against the shifty lass.
It’s a pretty raw chronicle of what happens in these types of communities. You’ve captured that progression well: from the initial welcome to the eventual rejection when someone’s needs clash with the group dynamics. Using terms like ‘cancerous attention’ adds a clinical coldness that makes the poem feel more like a damage assessment report than just a random attack.
nice poem
we welcome this new chapter
Cocksucking RETARD. First of all, you all attacked me the SECOND I started commenting even though I was very nice. I’m not a fucking NARCISSIST and I’m definitely not fragile. Your poem fucking sucks ass, just like you do. I’m not insecure and I don’t crave attention. Go eat a fucking shit-filled pie. Fuck off. Cry harder. Fuck all of you. Retarded, cocksucking, dipshit, jerkoff, faggot.
I bet you asked AI to make this, dumbass. Fucking bawbag. I bet you’re an American asshole. Probably have an American flag. Well fuck you. Americans fucking suck dick.